WALT use information to describe a setting in the story wooden arms
At the start there was only a little whare. They made it into a marae with beautiful maori designs after a while more people started coming so they needed something bigger.turned into a church. the church had too much people coming so they left after that a shoe maker found it but there were so much people that came it was to small so he left then a doctor found it but there was so much people that started coming so he left and then a dressmaker found it but to much people came so she left.It was a dance studio but so many kids came so she left.
I like the way you shared your WALT so that we know what your learning was. I also like your picture. Next time maybe try to use a range of vocab, so you are not repeating yourself. I look forward to reading more of your writing. ~Your friend, Alani and Venessa~
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