My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Friday, July 26, 2019
Te Ahu Cinema The Lion King - First Draft
On Thursday Te manga and Te Tinana went to Te Ahu cinema to see the lion king as went hoped on the bus I was so excited I nearly fell over. I walked in it got darker and darker me and Cleo walked up the stairs. We sat on the second to last row then the movie started the start was really sad because Mufasa died trying to save Simba from a stampede.Scar pushed him of instead of saving him and then everyone thought it was Simba who killed Mufasa scar told Simba to run away Simba found a beautiful tropical jungle and started running towards Pumba the warthog and Timon the Meerkat but then Pumba said if you want to stay on the island you have to eat bugs and grubs he said they were slimy but satisfying so Simba ate one he said they were slimy but satisfying then Simba said he did something terrible so then Timon said all you have to think is Hakuna Matata because it means no worries then they started singing Hakuna Matata that was my favourite part. Simba grew older and older then Nala his best friend from when he was a kid came and said how they were in trouble did you know Nala's voice is beyonce. At first Simba refused then he realised that if he didn't his mother and Nala would be in danger so then he went to stop scar the jungle was in danger
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You need to fix your first sentence.The rest of it was great. Well done Liv.
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